Leaves haiku

Greenery swaying

In invisible motion

Arching their arms out

7 thoughts on “Leaves haiku

    1. Thanks for the feedback, Laughing_Soul. ๐Ÿ™‚ So one thought broken into three lines? Did I do the syllables correctly? Which I believe is 5/7/5.

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      1. Don’t bother about syllables, it’s no more a compulsion because Japanese wrote haiku in morae. Only remember 1st two lines have to be a phrase and 3rd line should say another story.

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